Strong writing. Notice the progressive literary technique the author utilizes to simulate the colloquial accent: writing out the full word "and" wouldn't properly portray the slack jawed drawl that comes along with years of chewing tobacco detereorating one's teeth.
The author also employs multiple periods after sentences to mimic the mindless rambling of the uneducated hillbilly. Using proper punctuation would give the reader the impression that the speaker can coherently convey feelings and emotions verbally.
The main weakness in this piece of writing is the authors dependence on the phrase "lol" to stand in for the moonshine-fueled cackling that passes for the speaker's laughter. In this case, the incessant use of the phrase serves as more of a reminder of the author's weaknesses than the speaker's ignorance.
Overall the author cleverly employees literary techniques to properly bring to life the character of "bitter pessimistic redneck #6."
B+
