firestorm
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After sharing notecards yesterday for the Action Supernatural Horror Movie set in a City in the South US I got great feedback in the Screenwriting class.
For actual tension the Badass Hero needs to get damaged more because no damm challenge other than in the climax.
I need to give Goals to the 2 love interests.
He gets rejected by 1 woman so he does have a Plan B.
I need to show his Friend more.
Also something involving monsters and a animal that I wanted to avoid but was persuaded because it would help the Storyby showing how Nefarious these monsters are.
For actual tension the Badass Hero needs to get damaged more because no damm challenge other than in the climax.
I need to give Goals to the 2 love interests.
He gets rejected by 1 woman so he does have a Plan B.
I need to show his Friend more.
Also something involving monsters and a animal that I wanted to avoid but was persuaded because it would help the Storyby showing how Nefarious these monsters are.