take the new dorm i posted a picture of. Except for the towers McClung and Morril (maybe Andy Holt though that is being torn down soon) it is easily the biggest building on that side of campus. It is also incredibly long. it is close to Andy Holt road and the pedestrian walk. 1. as such it looms over it and tends to make people feel small next to it. the architect attempts to fix this with the concrete banding you see over the windows, breaking it down into floors is a visual trick to descale the building. 2. its ground floor does nothing to interact with the people walking past it, except for the entrance. Again people have a hard time associating with it because it doesn't engage them, the bottom floor is the same as the top, nothing is done in that manner to break up the scale, again. 3. even though the style of the gables is meant to echo other buildings on campus there are no buildings near it that have that style. so by fitting in it actually stands out. and even with the style it is copying the front facing gables over the elevator wings are inconsistent with the original style intent. 4. the color of the brick and grey window panels clash, this is my personal, yet professional opinion. 5. the paneling in the window is either a cheap, and failed imo, attempt to represent the 'T' or I don't know quite what. either way it is ugly and again does nothing to acknowledge that people live in those units. 6. with the large size variations should have been a key design feature to break it up. different window sizes in the rooms vs bathrooms or hallways, yet you only see the same size from the outside. again this makes it feel very impersonal and repetitive. 7. I am of the belief that you design a building based on the time it was built, acknowledging the use of modern materials and methods of construction. Having seen the structure I know they can easily span greater openings than what they are, this was likely done to minimize cost, but in that case why use the modern methods of construction (building codes). to me it is a wasted opportunity. 8. the very style it is copying is not the same typology of the intended use. Ayres and educational vs that thing and Residential. 9. the lack of details, one of the things that makes the Neo-gothic-Educational style is the level of details you get (checkerboard brick patterns, "gargoyles" etc etc) none of these decorations are found on the building, again suggesting the modern nature of the building but still using an older language.
I have run out of time or else I would go into how each of these, and several others could easily, and relatively cheaply, been resolved.