Well, she had some spelling issues in there (threated) and inconsistencies of capitalization (capitalizing Vol Walk, PotS but not Athletic Department). The AD is an organization and deserves just as much recognition as the PotS does, certainly. That's bad, at least in my book, if you're trying to draft up something that gets a large amount of attention... especially if you're doing so as the Drum Major representing a national University. It looks thrown together and unchecked.
Apart from that, this thing is laced with hyperbole. No actual facts are presented... just conjecture. It honestly reads like a "FW: FW: FW: FW: FW: FW: FW: FW:" e-mail that has a lot of pomp and no circumstance.
And yes, that was a pun.
Bingo.
Plus, there are no facts listed, i.e., references. It feels like a political propaganda commercial. Show me proof of the allegations. #1 (no bands travelling) is an SEC deal, not a Tennessee deal, if it's even true. #2 is hearsay; show me where the AD is proposing Rocky Top and only Rocky Top. #3 is an entitlement issue -- Aw, the Pride wants to be the ONLY music entity in the stadium. Sorry, but even I (a 4-year member and 2-year squad leader) can agree that the Pride can share the dead-ball periods with a can of music or more jumbotron videos.
To the students: Maybe if they would show up to the game en masse currently, their ticket allottment might not be in jeopardy.
To the Alumni: Show me where the AD is taking away the Alma Mater from halftime.
To the Fans: "the band is there before the team arrives and after the team leaves" -- The band is where? The stadium? Nope. Pre-game practice? Doubt it, even for the 6am saturday morning rehearsals. After the team leaves the stadium? Nope, there's a party to get to.
I just think, like DC said, if you're going to represent the University, and the Pride, especially as the leadership symbol of the Pride as the Drum Major, and you're going to solicit signatures on a petition, you better come harder than this, with indisputable facts.
It's just a poor effort, and I'll say, even as a alum, I did not sign it.